I'm elbow deep in finishing book 2 of my Chosen by the Gods series. In this scene our leading man, Devon, is about to show Shan why obyeing him can be oh so satisfying. All she has to do is follow his directions and let him take care of her. Mmmm how I love a Dom who knows what his sub wants even before she does.
Rubbing his lips as he stared at the computer screen, Devon said, "Kitten, take your panties off."
She narrowed her eyes at him considered telling him no. He glanced up at her with raised eyebrows, challenging her to defy him. Desire coiled in her stomach and she reached beneath her skirt, sliding the pink panties down her legs and over her boots. Unsure what to do next, she balled her damp underwear in her fist and set them on the windowsill next to a small potted cactus.
"Good girl. Now, turn around and bend over, clutching your ankles."
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19 comments:
A great excerpt! :) Love her internal thoughts.
Love the image of the pink panties next to a cactus!
PHEW! *Gulps cold water* HOT! Bit worried what he is going to do with the cactus though. LOL
Very nice, thanks!
She's such a good girl... and he's such a a bad boy. Great combo :) hehe
hot excerpt, and I am sooo loving that image!
I love the silent communication between them. Very hot.
I love a man that can give direction! Hot, hot, hot!
Oh, what a great excerpt. I'm ready for more. Wonderfully crisp structure that creates a visual image and engages the reader immediately.
Nice.
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Perfect Dom. Not nasty or mean just total authority! Perfect.
Nice interaction between them. Very intense.
Wow! Amazing snip!
Very hot! And the photo is the perfect accompaniment.
That could get her all hot and bothered.
'she balled her damp underwear in her fist and set them on the windowsill' Perfect line. Made her very human.
A very flexible girl... Loved the detail of the potted cactus!
She's really well written. Makes me wonder how distracted he is from whatever he's doing on the computer really.
Great snippet!
Love how she sets the panties next to a potted plant. Seems so incongruous. And yet right. Contrast between the pink panties and the potted plant is like the contrast b/w the 2 characters.
Mind out for the cactus! :-P
Whoa. Nothing like a Dom and his sub.
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