Picture has nothing to do with the story. I'm just obsessed with the way his muscles narrow down his hips and over his back. :)
She focused on his thumb and watched a shimmering garnet drop form at the tip.
He followed her gaze as the granite wall began to collapse in on itself and a dark doorway opened with traces of green mist filling the space. Running his bleeding thumb over his lips, he removed his hand and kissed her.
Cinnamon, heat, desire, the essence of fire. All these thoughts raced through her mind as she tried to put a name to the pleasure of his touch.
Distracted by the skill of his kiss, she didn't notice he was moving them into the darkness until he whispered against her lips, "Welcome to Hell."
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12 comments:
Very intriguing and suspenseful. Best of luck with this submission.
A very sexy and intriguing excerpt. Good luck with the submission!
Wow, Hell doesn't seem so bad a prospect!
Your writing is incredible!
Hell YES!
awesome snippet :-)
Dang, I was so hooked with the writing, that I moved right into that entrance along with them. Good luck with the sub.
*wipes drool* I will pay good money to any person who gets me the name of that perfect man in the pic. Oh my.
And I'm sure it was a nice excerpt too, but I can't stop staring. Wow.
Love the dark magical setting!
Thank you ladies so much for your kind words! I really dig this story (duh) and can't wait to be able to actually share the whole sex enchelada. :D
Beautiful. Great writing.
Good luck on the submissions!
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